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A Woman Asked Me to Fix a Watch Stopped at 4:17. I Recognized the Dent.

Family Secrets2 min read

A watchmaker opens a pocket watch that belonged to his father and finds a note from his sister.

Original fiction · Chapter 1 of 2

The Watch That Stopped at 4:17

The watch had stopped at 4:17. That was the first thing the young woman told me when she laid it on the counter.

The second thing was that it had belonged to a man who owed her mother an apology.

I repair watches in a shop narrow enough that two customers have to turn sideways to pass each other. On rainy evenings people sometimes come in for shelter and ask about a clock they don't intend to bring back. She had come with the watch wrapped in a clean handkerchief.

I recognized the back. A dent ran across it like a small crescent moon. I had made that dent myself when the watch fell off a bicycle handlebar outside the post office.

“Where did your mother get this?”

“It was in the bottom of her sewing basket.” She hesitated. “She died last spring. I found a repair slip from your shop in the same basket.”

She unfolded the paper. It was from my last year working for the previous owner. Before I could read the name, I recognized my handwriting in the notes: Leave it stopped.

The watch had been my father's. When I turned nineteen, he gave it to me with a lecture about time and a warning about keeping it away from water. Three months later I lent it to my sister Della. I had told myself she'd sold it. In the arguments we used to have, it was the kind of thing I could picture her doing.

The woman said her mother's name was Della. She watched me while I opened the back with a dull blade.

“You're Henry,” she said.

I nodded. I hadn't seen my sister in twenty-six years. For an instant I expected her daughter to have her laugh. Then I realized I didn't know what I could possibly say to make her laugh.

The watch needed a mainspring. There was a strip of paper tucked behind the movement, thin enough that it slid out on the point of a screwdriver.

It was a hospital wristband. The name printed on it was mine.

Below it, someone had written 4:17 p.m. Henry opened his eyes.

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